I thought Yale taught its undergraduates to write coherent, persuasive expository essays. This essay jumps from one topic to another without adequate logic nor presentation. As DZhee pointed out in his comment earlier, the criticism of this essay for each paragraph written will take couple pages. I strongly suggest the author to retake some freshman expository writing course first. It does not reflect well on Yale education in my opinion.
Colombia recalls ambassador to Venezuela amid border crisis (Reuters)
from the article: A binational Israel will hurt both Israelis and Palestinians